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Escape and Evade by Jeff Jones

28/3/2021

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I glance at my watch and note the time. I’m running late. I always seem to be running late. If 
I’m going to make it to the drop-off point and back without being caught, I am going to have 
to hurry. So much could go wrong. There are so many variables.
Despite the chilly autumn air, I can feel beads of sweat trickling down the side of my 
face and my cotton shirt clings damply to my back. I can’t worry about my appearance now, 
all that matters is safely delivering my package and getting back before those cold, 
heartless… No, calm down, don’t say it, don’t even think it, you’ve got to watch your blood 
pressure, the doctor said so. Try and avoid stressful situations he said. Well I guess I’ve 
failed that one.
There’s nothing else for it, my hands are tied, I’m going to have to take the direct 
route through their territory. I should have left earlier, but I always know best. Or so I think. 
The smart play would be to double-back, come in from a direction they wouldn’t be 
expecting. They’d still see me of course, but by the time they’d organised a chase I’d be 
clear. I could deliver the package safely and would then stand a better chance of outrunning 
them on the way back no longer burdened by any cargo. They’d be waiting for me, 
prepared, but I would fancy my chances.
Another glance at my watch. Two more precious minutes have passed. I have to 
decide, though in my heart I’ve known all along that I have no choice but to make a run for it 
across their turf. There isn’t time for anything else.
I turn my jacket collar up, adjust my grip on the package and take a deep calming 
breath just like my physiotherapist taught me. It doesn’t work, my heart’s still racing, and 
my hands are clammy. Head down I emerge from my hiding place and make a run for it, or a 
brisk walk anyway, running’s beyond me nowadays.
Moments after I emerge from the anonymity of the shadows, the sun decides to 
finally make an appearance, illuminating me for all to see. The brief warmth it offers is most 
welcome, but its betrayal of my presence isn’t. It’s like nature itself is conspiring against me. 
I stop stock still like a rabbit caught in a car’s headlights. I’m expecting to hear a shout of 
excitement as one of them spots me, if not from one of their senior interrogators, at least 
from one of their scouts. But to my delight and surprise, there is no shout, just the usual 
hubbub of noise one would perhaps expect on a Tuesday afternoon.
Hope briefly flares in my heart and I dare to believe I can make it and strike a blow 
for the ordinary man, and my pace quickens in anticipation. 
I must be halfway across their patch now, maybe more. A small smirk of victory – no 
it’s too soon for that – of hope then, begins to tug at the corners of my mouth.
A flicker of movement to my right. Was it real or imagined? I must keep going, 
sanctuary is in sight, tantalisingly close. Stay on mission. Don’t be distracted. 
There it is again. Somebody is there. I stop; my first mistake and turn to look; my 
second. He’s been lurking menacingly in a shop doorway, one of the many closed down 97
shops that now litter our High Street, searching for a target and now he’s found one. The 
hunt is on.
He’s onto me in a flash. From the moment we make eye contact my fate is sealed, he 
knows it and I know it, but like any trapped or cornered animal fighting for its life, I’m not 
going to go down without a fight.
Panic threatens to overwhelm me and after backing slowly away from him I finally 
manage to break eye contact and try to make a run for it, but all sense of direction has 
abandoned me, and I’m flustered into indecision. The world around me has shrunk, 
suffocating me and claustrophobia has me in its vice-like grip.
Finally, I regain my bearings and resume my escape, but seemingly out of nowhere 
his comrades have surrounded me and are closing in from all directions. His sort never hunts 
alone, I should have remembered that. I’m trapped.
I nervously turn to confront my tormentor. He’s grinning and knows I’m cornered. 
The game’s up. Judging by the wide-awake suit, expensive loafers and trendy haircut, this 
one must be one of their most senior interrogators. This is going to go hard on me. He won’t 
accept any excuses and will pursue me relentlessly if I try and bolt. No point trying to appeal 
to his compassionate side either, as his sort don’t possess one. Can’t in their job. They need 
to be ruthless, dogged, determined. I watch anxiously as he reaches inside his double-breasted
suit jacket and I hold my breath, his eyes never leaving mine as he closes the gap 
between us to virtually zero. I hear a gentle clicking noise as his Parker pen is primed for 
action, much like its wielder.
Behind him, just down the other end of the High Street, I see a man in a dark blue 
uniform slowly circling my car, no doubt salivating at the prospect of issuing another ticket. 
If I’d just left earlier, if I’d just paid for my parking instead of gambling by parking in one of 
the town’s ‘free parking for 20 minutes’ spaces. If I’d just taken another route across the 
High Street.
None of it matters now. I could try pretending that I’m from Poland or some other 
Eastern European country, but the last time I tried that the interrogator himself turned out 
to be from there and I ended up looking a right fool. Better to just take my punishment and 
get it over with. Resigned to my fate I drop my bag of library books at my feet and look the 
young man in front of me squarely in the eye.
Guess this is one market research survey I’ll have to endure.
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